I liked this a lot. It was very straightforward and to the point. I especially liked how quickly Squall granted Seifer's request, as if his holding out was just a formality and they both knew he'd say yes.

I enjoyed the verbal sniping back and forth.

I like the way Seifer holds himself back from insulting Squall's choices in interior decorating with a will becausehe needs this help (did Seifer ever think that noticing such things in the first place makes him slightly questionable?).