ext_65778 ([identity profile] mneme-forgets.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] edenbound 2006-03-30 08:01 pm (UTC)

I love how Gippal gets all emotional when Rikku has her baby and the way he is sorry that there is no father there to love and admire them both.

"There should be a proud man to love Rikku and the baby, there should be smiles, but instead Rikku is alone." That second comma should be a semi-colon.
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