edenbound: (KH)
edenbound ([personal profile] edenbound) wrote2006-03-21 08:37 pm

KH: Blocked

Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing: None
Warnings: Angst
Rating: PG
Summary: Leon is searching. For the "Missing You" challenge at [livejournal.com profile] kh_drabble.



Leon misses things he no longer cares to remember, and he doesn't care to show it, either. No matter what Aerith says, with her soft smiles and her encouraging therapy, no matter how Yuffie coaxes and smiles. Not even for Sora, who Leon would follow anywhere; the true Keyblade master who should be older, should be wiser, and isn't, and makes that okay.

Leon misses things and people he's blocked from his memory, and he misses the memory, too, all caught up in himself and the losses suffered.

He catches himself staring up into the starry sky, arms wrapped round himself, searching...

[identity profile] sel-barton.livejournal.com 2006-03-22 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
You make me really wish I didn't have writer's block right now. So much depth in your character writing. So much detail that brings the reader into the feelings of the character. You have a lot of promise in writing.

[identity profile] edenbound.livejournal.com 2006-03-22 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. ^^ I love to write and play around with characters, and one day I'll put it all to good use and write something to get published -- in the mean time, fandom is my sandbox.

(Mind you, I'll probably write fanfic even when I'm a popular author. ;D)

[identity profile] mneme-forgets.livejournal.com 2006-03-23 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
This is lovely. Leon seems in love with loss. That seems very like him.