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edenbound ([personal profile] edenbound) wrote2006-07-27 12:36 pm

F: Snake in the Grass

Fandom: Firefly
Pairing: None
Warnings: None
Rating: G
Summary: Waiting for Jayne to get in position. For [livejournal.com profile] 5sentence_fics.



Minutes stretch long before Jayne answers, and Mal shifts uncomfortably in his hiding spot and glances across to the spot where Zoe lies concealed. He knows discomfortin'ly well exactly how easy it is to offer Jayne a better deal and he's half expectin' a knife at his throat, especially with how long Jayne seems to be takin' to get to his spot. Discomfortin'ly long.

Somehow, his luck holds, though -- seconds after he thinks that, the radio crackles.

"Still not enough money to make me turn on you, Mal," Jayne says, with a grin in his voice.
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[personal profile] lassarina 2006-07-28 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
That's great :D I love how Mal's aware that it won't take much to turn Jayne, and how Jayne acknowledges that when he radios in.