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edenbound ([personal profile] edenbound) wrote2006-06-06 08:18 pm
Entry tags:

F: Run

Fandom: FAKE
Pairing: Bikky/Lai
Warnings: None
Rating: PG
Summary: Of not wanting to run. For [livejournal.com profile] dollupdame.



Bikky had kinda never thought about Lai that way. At all. In fact, he hadn't even thought about kissing any guy at all, particularly not one he still had snippy little fights with. But he wasn't making the biggest attempt to push Lai off, strangely enough. He sort of didn't feel like it.

He wondered if that's what Ryo had felt like when Dee would kiss him and he'd look like he wanted to run but he didn't.

"Bikky...? I..."

Lai was a little breathless. Pulling away. Bikky acted on instinct, grabbing his arm and pulling him back.

"Too chicken to follow through?"

"No way."

[identity profile] clarify.livejournal.com 2006-06-06 08:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Delicious. Absolutely fantastic. What I said about your great characterization earlier? Very much present in this piece, also. I especially love how you adopted Bikky's colloquialism. You are totally my new hero.

[identity profile] edenbound.livejournal.com 2006-06-06 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee. Glad you liked. :D ♥ I should write more for FAKE, but Final Fantasy, like, consumes me. xD

[identity profile] clarify.livejournal.com 2006-06-06 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I know exactly how you feel. I love FAKE and everything about it, but I'm such a Final Fantasy drone. I think I might attempt something, though. If just a one-shot. You totally inspired me. <3

[identity profile] edenbound.livejournal.com 2006-06-06 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Heeee. Inspiration is good. xD

very well written

[identity profile] sothis-ismylife.livejournal.com 2006-09-21 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
i think that you stayed really well in character i cant find anyone who writes this pairing, and it is soo cute and in my opinion very much implied, any who it is very well written

*huggs*