edenbound: (FFVIII)
edenbound ([personal profile] edenbound) wrote2006-06-01 05:12 pm

FFVIII: The Rarity of Smiles

Fandom: Final Fantasy VIII
Pairing: Seifer/Squall/Zell
Warnings: Dialogue only fic
Rating: PG
Summary: Silliness at bedtime. For my beloved and wonderful [livejournal.com profile] candywrapper.



"You know, Zell, I think that was almost a smile from our strong and silent lover there."

"I think it might've been, Seifer."

"Are you doubting me, chickie?"

"Usually I would, but in this case, it's Squall I'm doubting, not you. I've only ever seen him smile a few times and that was always in the presence of a sorceress."

"Perhaps the smile is related to sorcery, then. Hey, you're enough of a girl to be a sorc -- "

"Seifer!"

"What?"

"Don't ever call me a girl. I can kick your ass anytime."

"Sure you can, chickie, in -- "

"Would you two just shut up?"

"Yes, mister puberty boy sir."

"Seifer..."

[identity profile] shealakiah.livejournal.com 2006-06-01 04:54 pm (UTC)(link)
That was cute. ^^

[identity profile] koolkat2001.livejournal.com 2006-06-01 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
*snickers* These three... they're always so amusing.
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[personal profile] lassarina 2006-06-01 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*falls over laughing* Oh, this was lovely. So nice. You really capture people in your dialogue fics, I think.

[identity profile] edenbound.livejournal.com 2006-06-01 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I love writing dialogue only fics. :) I used to think it was a cop out, but it's really not. Character is harder to bring across, detailed description is impossible, and a thousand other difficulties -- like making it any length at all. xD;