Awww Gippal crying. I am sorry for being so pleased he got punched.

"He leaves Bevelle and Baralai, not for long, no, not for long, he'll be back." I'd change that last comma to a semi-colon.


Heh I love how the last and greatest crime in the list of things Rikku did is that she made Gippal break machina. But I think that your observation that she stole his memories is lovely.

Heh, running to Yuna to fix things is likely something that lots of people do.