ext_20224 ([identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] edenbound 2010-03-24 04:27 am (UTC)

Beautiful! I love the last paragraph or so, especially, with Jimmy flexing his hands and realizing he's in sole possession of himself, now. He's got to be the one to step up and do it.

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