I'm glad you think it works, particularly as I occasionally come under fire for not writing longer fic. :p

I keep meaning to write more about Rinoa, because I like her a lot more than most people in the fandom, but somehow there's never the right opening for it. I've got two longer fics in planning that involve her -- one about her backstory with Seifer, and how they met, and the other that's probably going to be somewhat more about Squall, but will feature her as a matter of course because it's about him having to maintain a relationship with her for professional reasons, because as a SeeD he's told to keep an eye on the sorceress. It's going to be fun. :D